1) Change ‘him’ into ‘his’. A possessive adjective comes before a gerund (joining)
2) use it (pronoun) for a dog.
3) ‘Between….. and’ takes objective form of pronoun. Change ‘I’ into ‘me’
4) use ‘myself’ reflexive with avail.Add ‘myself’
after avail.
5) Use ‘yourself’ after put instead of ‘you’
6) Change ‘whom’ into ‘who’. ‘The man’ is the subject here that will take relative pronoun ‘who’.
7) Change ‘himself’ into ‘him’.
8) Change ‘who’ into ‘which’ .Relative pronoun which will be used for the talking activity.
9) Remove ‘he’. In a single sentence a noun and a pronoun for the same noun can’t come together.
10) Change ‘that’ into ‘when’ as ‘2006 ‘ is a point of time.
11) ‘keep’ does not take reflexive so, remove yourself.
12) no error
13) ‘mention of you ‘ in place of ‘your me
14) Use ‘Separation from you’ instead of your separation
15) ‘At the sight of them’ in place of ‘at their sight‘.
16) Which in place of who
17) no error. The sentence means there is no country which is not corrupt.
Note – Here ‘but’ has been used as a relative pronoun though it’s a conjunction.
18) neither in place on none. We have two arms.
19) no error. Refer to the explanation of question number 17th.
20) use ‘it’ in place of ‘the same’
Note – The use of ‘the same’ as a pronoun is wrong.
21) use ‘it’ in place of ‘the same’. Refer to the explanation of question 20th.
22) her in place of she
23) Those in place of they
24) that in place of who
Note – The same… takes ‘that’ relative pronoun
25) You, he and I in place of you, I and he
(231 order)